I've elaborated on the man's staff—if it was "strange-looking" I wanted to describe it. Probably because of the way my own language works, which differs a little bit in that regard from english. You make some good points and I will try to take lesson from them. There's two minor things: in the sentence second to last I use the word "alive", but I also considered "lively". He was dressed in old purple robes which may once have looked exquisite, having showed him as a man of importance, but now they looked worn and their once rich color had long since faded from years of lengthy use. As for me claiming 60 years to be old, you are right of course, and it is my bad to forget to mention that this old man is a man of the old days - from the middle ages you might say. Besides, I was also out to improve my vocabulary a little, which I did.
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